I Stand Alone

• Artist: the helfire poet
• Description: make of it what you will
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: stand alone

Open plains before my eyes,
Gentle clouds sail on the skys,
The oceans roars behind the trees,
And quiet hum of passing bees.

But at the end, upon the edge,
Demons march in from the ledge,
From my mind they come to tear me down,
Their thundering march without a sound.

Who is it who stands with me?
Who is it who hears my plee?
My face turns pale, white like bone,
i realise now, i stand alone.

Comments

[--xiLoverzHimx--]

aw. i think i had a tear lol..
its so cute. but so depressed.. but still nice

[F o r e v e r Brok3n]

U call me a good poet? what does that make u a god? ^^ I love this peom, it might be my insperation. xD lmao, and Sparkle97 is so wrong, all I say is keep it up and u'll be making millions in no time at all!

[Doomed gaara243]

I love it!!!! The misspellings are one thing that gives it character. Yes I would say it is about lonliness as well. Don't listen to sparkle97 it is perfect.

[Cuteness of Doom]

that is my favorite poem that you have writen. ignore what sparkle97 says. she knows nothing. im going to become a fan =^-^= keep up the good work!

[sparkle97]

few probs. 1 skys is supposed 2 be skies. 2when it says "when the oceans roars behind the trees" it should be "wen the oceans roar behind the trees". 3 realise is realized. its a good poem but it needs more.....meaning its a start

[Sid the Body Gaurd]

a beautiful poem about ... lonelynes I presume? but still meaningles or not ti has a srong soul.