forever more

• Artist: forestwolf42
• Description:
  I little poem see if you can figure out how the third stanza was made
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: forever more creative

My heart bleeds
What was once
There my life
Has no light
Life is over
What is there?
To be destroyed
By my love

Torn asunder
Shreds remain for
Heart removed and ripped apart
Has no more start
There is no more
Blood drains out
A silent heart
Dies right here with no start
I leave you there forever more

Torn asunder
My heart bleeds
Shreds remain for
What was once
Heart removed and ripped apart
There my life
Has no more start
Has no light
There is no more
Life is over
Blood drains out
What is there?
A silent heart
To be destroyed
Dies right here with no start
By my love
I leave you there forever more

Comments

[beachgoer]

cool, i usually prefer an easier flow, and ditto on the how it was made..not that challenging to be honest.

[zXzThis_Is_MezXz]

i like it and you made it by taking one sentance from the 2nd and then the top and so on i like it lots 5/5