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The nth degree of wakefulness
Lids flutter
Then descend
The brightness of unconscious being
Pulled below
Mirrored surface
Of shrouded dusky waters
Beneath fathomless depths
Of vast sublime sea
Of sleep
- Title: Elegy To Cyclic Dissolution
- Artist: Kibroth
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Description:
Experiential writing, easily related to.
Thank you H.P. Lovecraft.
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: elegy cyclic dissolution sleep
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Comments (6 Comments)
- WereSquishy - 03/13/2009
- You strike me as a Tool fan no?
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- Roboticyouth - 01/31/2009
- 1st stanza does it for me, kinda wish you would have stuck with that scheme.
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- ADSOC - 01/27/2009
- biggrin luv it
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 01/25/2009
- I actually really enjoy this poem. excellent job.
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- _Roooose_ - 01/19/2009
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''The brightness of unconscious being
Pulled below
Mirrored surface
Of shrouded dusky waters''
Beautiful ;] 4/5 - Report As Spam
- crazy_mean_girl - 01/18/2009
- I like its description sorta reminds me of swamps beautiful swamps
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