Realization

• Artist: XxartistsxinxtrainingxX
• Description: My first poem I'm postin on here, so any feedback would be great...but I was thinking that before you realize something, you're usually given all sorts of signs that it is going to happen...sometimes...but it is usually most prominent when it doesn't notice you, whatever it may be...and this is more like a third person, out of body experience thing, for all you technical people
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: realization death

Realization,
You come rushing over,
Standing there in front of me,
Yet I can't see

Realization,
You scream at me,
Shouting words of a threating nature,
But I won't see you,

Realization,
You slap me,
Beat me,
Abuse me,
But I still refuse to see you,

Realization,
You learn a new tactic,
Giving the ice cold shoulder,
And I finally see you,

Realization,
You learn too late,
For the message is too far gone,
And I am dead

Comments

[XxartistsxinxtrainingxX]

thanks soo much, i really do appreciate it. and philosopher_of_smexiness I am going to make time to look at your poems.=]

[Little Egypt kk]

i love it soo much

[RandomOrgasmicPoke]

very well done.. i lyk it. i like how you used realization and went into depths of how hurtful it can be. i have written some poems on here of my own. i have many more to post but feel free to read what is there and comment.... either way great job. you got alot of messaging through in this short poem. 4 stars