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Cast into the darkest abyss,
Not many feel pains like this.
Pains of loss.
No matter where I go,
Isee death all around.
I watched my friends fall,
I never knew,
No not at all.
What happened to everyone?
They're all gone,
Even if it was wrong.
There was a wish to live forever,
But also never.
You'll see everyine around you fll,
But yourself...
No not at all.
There is no portal to happiness,
You stand tall,
But never fall...
Because you've already fallen.
My portal.
Immortal...
- Title: Immortal
- Artist: Taju
- Description: i was bored...please comment
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: immortal
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Comments (1 Comments)
- BASS HUNTA - 01/23/2009
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its good (i'll give you that much)
but it could be better, a little detail goes a long way
4/5 - Report As Spam