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The night sky is dark
The shining has ceased to be
When shall I begin?
The tug on my heart
I must go there, to that place
Will I then be free?
I begin to fall
My tears will be blown away
By the soaring wind
No longer lonely
I will join my fallen friends
Those lost long ago
I'm getting closer
The end of me is nearing
Will someone see me?
Will they see my light?
Will that one be inspired?
It is now the end.
Down I look upon
Such beautiful scenery
I hope that maybe
Can I join that world?
For isn't it as they say?
As time follows through
That humans are made
With a wonderous creation
All made from star dust.
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I look at the sky
I see shining brilliance
Farewell fallen star
- Title: A fallen star laments
- Artist: elenawing
- Description: A small series of haikus of a fallen stars' thoughts as it heads towards its end.
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: fallen star laments
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kaito_7420 - 01/24/2009
- It's beautifully written. I love how your choice of words evokes powerful imagery within the mind of the reader.
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- SSA CHRIS HALL - 01/20/2009
- great job!!!
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- Starlight_Miss - 01/19/2009
- Amazing! rate back please!
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- Mr-Mario-JOCK - 01/19/2009
- that was realy nice your really good
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