Water

• Artist: windy727
• Description: I am just a second grader but I was writing this haiku and my cousin said it was kinda good so I submitted it.
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: water

Gentle drips drip down,
From up the sky clouds above,
It is gentle calm.

Comments

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The last line doesn't make very much sense. "There is gently calm," or, "It is gently calm," would fit better.

I highly doubt that you're a second grader though. But at any rate, 4/5.