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The sun has dove down between the dark clouds that lay above me.
You're the one to make my day more valuable.
You're luscious, and so adorable.
Our hugs,
I'd rather never let go.
I would keep hugging you,
for hours.
I love them.
When I hold your hand,
I nearly die.
You're so unbelievable;
you make me feel special.
When my fingers are locked in between yours,
my heart beats evermore.
You're just that kind-of person,
to make me feel that;
like I have never before,
love.
I hope we last forever;
you're the true one I love.
I wish for us to be together,
until we die.
But even then,
we will be together.
We will die together,
hand and hand,
fingers latched inbetween one anothers'.
Nothing will change that.
I think,
this is,
True Love.
I love you.
- by volo libero |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/20/2009 |
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- Title: The Feeling
- Artist: volo libero
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Description:
Yea, I couldn't think of a good name. .___.'
And it's not SO great, it's one of my old ones..
Most of mine are about love. :/
Don't be too harsh, but comment and tell me what I should improve on. (: - Date: 01/20/2009
- Tags: feeling love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 02/13/2009
- i like it! Fukuruo's title will work
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- Fukuruo - 01/26/2009
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I think you ment "Hand in Hand"
Also,use more sophisticated words
Overall 4/5 - Report As Spam