Dance with Death

• Artist: rawreetstori
• Description: As a challenge, I was given a single sheet of paper with certain words listed which were words I was to use in the poem. I could not repeat a word if it was not given more than once on the list. After constructing this for about an hour, I decided to post it online to see if it's a decent poem.
  
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• Date: 02/04/2009
• Tags: dance with death

He kindly held

an immortality

He


put away


leisure


For His Civility

We passed the Setting Sun-


He passed-


Quivering and Chill-

For only

time- and yet,

Were toward eternity.

Comments

[xXSammie-CandyXx]

cute <3

[rawreetstori]

Thank you very much.

[C-0MRADE]

This is amazing. ^^