The Bells of Hell

• Artist: cratoz101
• Description: i wrote this poem some time ago havent actually revised it..just came into thought
• Date: 02/07/2009
• Tags: bells hell

The sounds of death crept through his vulnerable mind, destroying all that he found made lost. writhing in pain and anger is what brings him to life as the old ones say "i have no friends, nor enemies only competitors". ready for battle with Satan at his side while his hands shake wanting the thrill to kill. ringing the bell to open hell like the midnight sky waiting for a shining sun. to kill, steal, destroy and immobilize your mind, then all we need is time. time to finish others and successfully die. the feeling to burn, to tear through a simple man's skin, and kill him in front of his love ones that is what we call..unjust

Comments

[290DarkStars]

I THINK that you read your Bible because of that passage, "to steal, to kill, and to destroy" is actually a Bible verse. Annyway, although I have had days almost exactly how you described it, I kinda wished that you where more abstract and took longer to explain it. Thats just a suggestion though.

[Rohan_Zantos]

Cool deal
I enjoyed the prose, now I am expecting some BA combat sequence or perhaps a short story. Its expandable