Puppet Master

• Artist: 13Garra13
• Description: This is my cry for independence. I submited this poem to a bigger contest they wanted me to go some where but I could not find any one willing to sponsor me so I stayed home this would have been in a big book of poems if I would have went. Plz rate and comment: this was written on 3-22-06
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: puppet master

I am like a puppet
People pull my strings
And tell me what to do
If I don't do it they yell
If I do it right
I get nothing in return
From now on my strings are cut
I'm following my own path now

Comments

[Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX]

hmm i wouldnt exactly call it a poem though it is just as beautiful and i can understand all to well ^^ be a rebble fight back i agree 5/5

[lime green pop]

thats so good!!!
and how u used the puppet as like an example is cool too
and its so good sometimes i feel like a puppet too
nothing in return but if u dont do i right u get punished

[naruto_ramen_ kitty]

that's deep! i like how you wrote this. you must write more! please