Construct on Fear

• Artist: NakedJack
• Description: I'm trying to convey disgust. I understand that most won't understand what its about, even with the preamble, so feel free to rate it what ever you like. I like what I have written and I pretty sure that is the first rule of making art.
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: construct fear

Simply for the horror!
In a bathtub of blood
Soaking it into your pores
Under electric drama
The faucet of a TV screen

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The ever speaking mouth
Hypnotizing, entrancing babel
Bellowing bile into developing minds
Those with open ears and shut eyes;
Feeding blind on what they want to hear
Transformed into eatable masses;
Fatten-Cattle-Herds catching shut-eye

The mouth of preparation
Hacking, gagging into the Melting Pot
Vomiting on the willing heads
The indigestible bits of former victims
Marinating morsels in fear,
Marinating in the reality they hold so dear
The stomach, the origin of figment

The all consuming mouth
Constructed, contrived, a meal
Serving you with the illustrious and dull alike
Idiots, thankful for their space on the Plate,
Hoping to fill the empty space still left inside
"Don't go" they say, "Don't go", they demand you to stay
Clinging to you, they want to know it's going to be okay

Comments

[scitama]

I think you did a good job converying disgust. Well done smile

[Husk3]

When I read this I thought of Government as right of the bat from your first stanza and as far as disgust. I saw like a big disapproval against media - whether that's what you meant to portray or not I dunno... but that's what I got either way 5/5

[xXsecret_artistXx]

umm. so you wanted me to be grossed out? it sounds like something that came out of a salvador dali painting. :*