over

• Artist: lost in tears forever
• Description: this is a song i just wrote for any1 who has ever felt like this so i hope u like it and comment if u want to
• Date: 02/22/2009
• Tags: over

i need you girl its true
i cant help falling for you
i never knew i would
be in love with you so much
its hard to sleep
to see you with him
so hard to stand

i would give you the world
i would give you my love and my soul
i would give you my heart but its broken
you like who i am
ill do anything to give
what it takes to be your man

i stay awake at night
thoughts take over the good
things thrown going insane
trying to control the anger
but you cant see

i would give you the world
i would give you my love and soul
i would give you my heart but its broken
you like who i am
i would do anything to give
what it takes to be your man

the nights get darker
the pain gets deeper
the truth is on the walls
the silence gets louder
time fades away
its to late

i would give you the would but its burned down
i would give you my love and soul but there gone
i would give you my heart but you torn it in two
your blind to see who i am
ill never know what it gives to be your man

Comments

[sycoskater]

im loving the song its just amazing. I just have one thing to say though, u can do better than her, trust me u seem amazing and if she cant see that then she is megga blind and should get her head examined. If i woz u i would try n forget about her, i know it will be hard, but try and find some one who will apreciate you and trat you well
xxx

[Happy-Go-Lucky Bear]

This idea is so great! I have a few suggestions for you though. I would look over it, there are a few grammatical errors in the wording as well as spelling and punctuation. It's really good!!! ^.^