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if i dont write then who am i
what if i write for my life
can they really not quite see
i believe in poetry
love and loss come together
do not fear the prize forever
for if u win at love
life will be your white dove
dont give up on hopes and dreams
together we can do many things
roam and run, have some fun
or spend our lives together
*the white dove is from one of my other poems. the dove to me means my love for poems. the white dove is what ever gives you peace and happiness
- by Supersuzie1524 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: Awaken
- Artist: Supersuzie1524
- Description: my comeback poem. the poem that i made after i quit and decided to go back to poem writing. hope you like it
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: awaken
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Comments (5 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 05/01/2010
- I agree with the two below me, they're very beautiful. 5/5
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- ptsluvsnfl - 02/23/2010
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Don't give up on writing when you clearly have a passion for it!
The flow is a little off at one point, but I really like the concept and think it is well-expressed. - Report As Spam
- Beware of Deep Crow - 02/24/2009
- Beautiful! smile
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- Supersuzie1524 - 02/24/2009
- I should just give up on poetry! I knew it was a bad idea to try again!
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- Supersuzie1524 - 02/24/2009
- man i knew nobody would like it!
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