i dont deserve

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: its about a friend who i put through pain. im very sorry for it. i dont expect to be forgiven so instead im just gona do the one thing she asked me to do. please rate and comment and critique its very important to me that i know whats right and whats wrong. thank you also there were originally the title in her shoes im not sure which is better so tell me which you like thanks .
• Date: 03/09/2009
• Tags: dont deserve

why couldnt i see it
why couldnt i see the pain i put you in
i didnt see that my life brought someone elses life into pain
but i see it now
i saw it in a dream
it was a dream i never want to see againi
i dream i hope never comes true
if it does i deserve it
i know that i cant change it
and i know saying sorry is just a word
but its a word that i mean
a word that speaks
of my own regret
a word that begs for forgiveness
i dont deserve
please give me once last chance to prove im worth believing in
i dont know if what i did was justified
but it wasnt meant to hurt someone
it was meant to help me
to help one
you had to hurt yourself
so dont forgive or forget
just move on

Comments

[Dreamy angel24]

Really Good i love poetry