~love~

• Artist: 27alana27
• Description: a girl and boy in deep love.
  Its basically just telling you how they feel.
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: love

~Love~
You look at me
I look at you

I wait a while
So do you

My heart is pounding
Love is surrounding

You move my hair
This is rare

Our eyes closed
I wiggle my nose

As our lips touch
You whisper in my ear
I love you so much

Comments

[critic-the-homeless]

it was good 4/5 but it needs to be longer and the laast stanza wasnt very good.