joy

• Artist: Call me Peachez
• Description: nrw. this is to my chain poem's. i wrote darkness first, so this is second to it. sory if it's not good.
• Date: 03/20/2009
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Joy
what is it?
Joy
how do we bottle it?

But wait, bottles?
bottles are what we call "soul keepers."
and like containers,
we are filled with joy.

Comments

[Im-a-pixie-233]

I don't think you need to add more or add some thing enjoyable, thats nonsense. I like it its very nice--short? yes but very nice. Its not really weird either,makes complete sense to me. 5/5

[GAlA Site Assistant 60]

hmm.. i think it's too short and i cant put my finger on it... oh yeah i think well since it's about joy you should add something enjoyable something fun well this is kinda boring so 3 stars only sorry

[food is gross]

weird