-
I want to go back
to that promise I made.
Back when things were true and clear.
Before my heart
had been ripped apart.
I knew it was foolish
to jump back blindly
into the drifting sea.
That promise I made way back when.
In that comfy place I had then.
Things were bright and great.
I want to stick to that promise
and erase those scares I did create
because of little boys and
a razor sharp blade.
I want to start over
begging with that promise I made.
- by o0Lost_Memory0o |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/20/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: When a Promise Was Made
- Artist: o0Lost_Memory0o
- Description:
- Date: 03/20/2009
- Tags: promise made
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- jadababby - 02/18/2010
- i'm speechless 5/5
- Report As Spam
- GAlA ASSIST - 03/23/2009
-
very skilled
i love it
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Guss254 - 03/21/2009
- WOW!!!
- Report As Spam
- XxInsaneCheesexX - 03/20/2009
- Very deep, and it makes the reader undertand more of what you are trying to pass along in this poem. Great description. Captivating, truly.
- Report As Spam