alone

• Artist: EtteNova
• Description: this was something i came up with a few days ago
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: alone

Here I am sitting in a corner, with a ball in my hand, wondering, what went wrong in my life? Who dose the world treat you after so many things have happened to you in a short time? Where did so many things go wrong or where did I go. Maybe, just maybe I'm alone in this world so I'll see you in a corner next time you feel alone.

Comments

[Yandere Neko]

Well, the second sentence doesn't make any sense and you misspelled "does" (Unless you meant to say "dose" which makes me even more confused O.o) The actual idea is interesting though, maybe work with it a bit more. Also, is the ball meant to be symbolic, or is it just there?
No offense or anything, not trying to be mean.