HLPSSA

• Artist: Kirai Dragon
• Description: Creative title huh?
  not really...I just wrote this poem last night
  I got the inspiration from the Naruto Manga. In one of the most recent chapters.
  I was not planning on posting it but my friend changed my mind...
  I'm not looking to win and nor do i expect to, what I am looking for is more opinions from people
  So please just leave a couple of comments stating your opinion on the poem
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: hlpssa

Hatred Spreads Fear
Love Begins War
Paths so Clear
Show at the Door
Steps of Sadness Appear
As Madness Draws Near

Comments

[shippuden ninja hinata]

like the person below me said you should expand it and i think that i has a good rhythm and meaning to it 5/5

[Alibis of the Heart]

It's good. Good flow to it, but I think you should expand on it!!!!!

[KiraKiraWelcomeToDEATH]

+^_^+ = loved it sheshhhhh
loved it people loved it, me just weird i love to make Kirai alll confused ^^

[KiraKiraWelcomeToDEATH]

Hate it +^_^+