"Invisible"

• Artist: Dissolve the Pain
• Description: The book I am reading (Looks) and the poem I recently read (I'm Nobody) gave me inspiration to right this poem.
  
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• Date: 03/24/2009
• Tags: invisible

I walk inside,
But I turn around
I realize this is not where I'm supposed to be
I can't be seen
I can't be known
I shall never be shown
I'm private
I'm small
I'm invisible
That is all
I'm quiet
And Lonely
No body seems to notice me
If I say anything
They'll see me
They'll hear me
They'll scream
Because they have never seen me
They would be afraid
One day,
I'll speak
And say goodbye
I'll wither
And die
With no one to notice me
No one would have cared for me

Comments

[Dissolve the Pain]

thanks guys smile

[CrazyChiyo]

That's the way I feel..I like it a lot.

[Yorio]

I really liked this one. Great work! d(^^d )