What happened to them

• Artist: Deshi_Venshin594
• Description: Comment if you like if not don't
• Date: 03/24/2009
• Tags: what happened them

What happened to them?
The love in her eyes is gone .
but the love in his burns on
He loves her still
he begs and tries to appease her
but nothing she does is more than to tease him
So I ask
What happened to them?
The star struck lovers.
The two who were one.
Those who i believed would never be parted
But alas the inconceivable has happened
She has left him
So what happened to them
Why did their love end?

Comments

[lilvane13]

2 words!!!!! stupid girl!!! the one in the story of course!!! but still one word bout ur amasing poem lol ^_^great!!!!

[Macabre Forever]

uh..Whoa!5/5

[Daddy Got This Account]

really great job, i love the word choice. ^^ it really flows. maybe you could add commas to the end words that dont have punctuation? or some other punctuation. but, i really like it. ^^ 100/5