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Death is like the moon,
It gives off light to some,
but is dark for others.
When the sky is dark,
it's like a person has given up.
The light of death comes,
as a heaven, to a body,
that seems to be cursed by hell.
To the man who comes,
in the light of the sun,
to find the man taken by the moon.
He will think the moon as terrible,
Not knowing what life was life,
for the man concieved by the moon.
Death is like the moon,
warm and cold,
a relise from life,
or a cruel taker of the light.
- by ineffable jay |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/25/2009 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Jerryboam - 03/31/2009
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It missed the point entirely with me
l ike the style not the premise
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- X_Shi_Tenshi_X - 03/27/2009
- gd title could be somethin like deathly moon or w/e idk unless i write the poem i cant tink of titles >.< over all great poem smile
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- meizha - 03/25/2009
- That's a nice comparison. Can't think of a title though.
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