Forsaken

• Artist: Triptych1991
• Description: Written on September 1, 2008
  The meaning is personal
  
  All work (c) me (Triptych91[deviantart]/Triptych1991[gaia])
• Date: 03/26/2009
• Tags: forsaken depression death scream bleed

Forsaken
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I scream my heart out
But no one hears me
They all forsaken me
I yell my soul away
And they just stare
For they think I'm crazy
I cut out my life
and I bleed to death

They just walk away
and let me to die

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-Triptych91(deviantart)/Triptych1991(gaia)

Comments

[mxmayhemx]

This is very good smile . For the person below, poems do not have to rhyme.

[sincerely ashley]

....doesnt ryhme...but its a good start...except...what is the heart of the story? I dont see the heart of poetry...Nice try...i give you a 4.3/5