The Creatue of the Night

• Artist: Death_God_Sakura
• Description: This poem just randomly came to me one day, so I decide to throw it up here. I hope everyone likes it.
• Date: 04/01/2009
• Tags: creature night moon dark

As the Sun sets
and the Moon rises
the creatures long forgotten
Raise from their lonely cradle

Seeking out those
Who once hunted them
Hunting for fun
Hunting for food
The creatures never rest
at Night

They can smell
your pouring sweat
They can see
your fleeting steps
They can hear
your throbbing heart
They can find
you no matter where you go

Comments

[Death_God_Sakura]

You are right, but the moon in not always in the same part of the sky, sometimes it is over China and not where I am

[NostaIgia]

I like it. 4/5...
But you know that the moon never rises, right? It's always up in the sky, but you can't see it because of all the light!
(Ahh, that rhymed! > w < wink