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You ask me if im ok
But you know im not
You ask me if ill be ok without you for awhiel
But ill never be ok
not even for awhile
You say i seem sad but '
you dont know half of it
You say i seemed distant but
really im here im just hurting
You ask me if i could live without you
But ill never really be living since the day he left
i've been broken.
- by xox_Cherry_Babe_xox |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/05/2009 |
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- Title: Broken
- Artist: xox_Cherry_Babe_xox
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- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: broken
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- xox_Cherry_Babe_xox - 04/12/2009
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Thanx.
And if you can think of anything to improve it just let me know.
and i dont see your reasoning oh boo hoo if it has the same name you'll live and get ova it.
It's just a poem bout how i feel the title isnt as important as the meaning hidden beneath and in the words in the poem. - Report As Spam
- singchick8 - 04/07/2009
- It so is so cool! I sort of understand how you feel.
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- slipknot is the best band - 04/06/2009
- thats cute. i totally understand b/c i just got out of a relationship sad
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- ImaTiffy - 04/06/2009
- ehhh 1/5 cuz u got the same name as my poem its sorta choppy and too short spelling mistakes ect... nice start
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