What If I...?

• Artist: Steihlia
• Description: just thoughts running through my head that i forced into a poem. i asked this to a guy once, and thinking about him sparked a flame that lit my candle and set me on fire. hah, that was cool! meybe ill write a poem about "thinking about him sparked a flame that lit my candle and set me on fire".
  
  i feel like this is one of my worst poems, so could you comment please?
• Date: 04/05/2009
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What if I cried?
Would you wipe away my tears?
What if I fell?
Would you catch me before I hit the ground?
What if I embraced reality?
Would you tear me from this world?
What if I cut my perfect, pure skin?
Would you snatch the knife from my bloodied hands?
What if I called you and said I met the one?
Would you tell me you're happy for me?
What if I told you he kissed me?
Would you truly be happy for me?
What if I called you back and said it was all over?
Would you ask me what happened?
What if I told you he wasn't the one after all?
Would you ask me who is the one?
What if I said it was you?
Would you breathe deeply and say, "I love you"?
What if I replied, "I love you too"?
Would you believe me?

Comments

[zae26]

I liked it,
and i dont think it was that bad

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

i love it. i can really relate to it.

[Thorn Of The Sky]

Well poems are usually long.I really liked this one!

[FabulA NovA NoctiS]

kinda long but awsome!!!