What a scary world

• Artist: MsMarija
• Description: Again sad and annoying poem. Thank you for your comments and ratings :) And please comment.
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: scary world

I hear a small doggies fighting
I hear their small voices
I hear my dog is howling -
What a scary world.

I see a fire on TV
I see a murder in the street
I see a confuse in the face
What a bloody world

I talk about storms
I talk about dead people
I talk about killed human

What a stupid world.

Comments

[Disco Lemon Zest]

Nicely done... and yeah about the typos... would be great (unless you put them there to represent the scariness of the world...)

[MsMarija]

thank you xD

[Sunafire]

Dont you mean 'Dead people' instead of 'Died people'
Few other typos too, fix them and it'll be great biggrin
I like this poem, its kinda political yet not.
4/5 biggrin