Mistakes

• Artist: Xxhidden_wingsxX
• Description: a poem i wrote about a girl who did drugs and now has nobody left to comfort her when she's through them. hope u like!! <3
• Date: 04/13/2009
• Tags: forgotten childen

"Just one time,"
I thought to myself
"I won't get hooked,
that'll be someone else."

I was wrong,
I made a mistake,
and now no one will help me,
they think i'm a fake.

My mama and papa,
they're already gone,
hey gave up on me,
they knew i was wrong.

My friends are in college,
living their lives,
no not one of them
has pain in their eyes.

Now I am forgotten,
just because of what I called fun
I know I've made too many mistakes,
and now I have nowhere to run.

XxXemorosesXxX heart

Comments

[unlovedtreehugger]

I loved it. I know someone like this. I wish she would get her life straight. Pretty good. The only thing that really throws me off is the rhyming. Then again, I don't use much rhyming.

[kuroshimodo-original]

. . . Was i suppose to feel bad cause I laughed at the girl. . .

[Xxhidden_wingsxX]

oh yea sorry the line "hey gave up on me" should be "they gave up on me." my bad!!! (^.^')