Swamp Song

• Artist: sheepcakes
• Description: My first Haiku, written originally for a naming contest in a B&C shop.
  I dunno that I have the punctuation right. I enjoyed writing this very much, it sorta all fell into place after I chose the name [name is the title].
  Comments, critiques & suggestions are always welcome.
• Date: 04/13/2009
• Tags: swamp song haiku

Listen to the song,
voices of the swamp blending
into harmony.

Comments

[Xexidael]

Charming... 1/5

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I don't really know how to critique haiku. I never saw the point in even writing them, if for anything other than lexical practice. Not bad, though. 3/5?