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A coffen there lay right in front of me.
My tears drop to the ground as forming a sea.
The walls enclose and the darkness is here.
I fall to my knees filled with fear.
I look around but I can't see.
Help! Help! As then i plea.
I start to think that this is real
Everything is silent but I hear a sqeal.
Someone loudly starts snapping.
Then it turns into terrible laughing.
Every night i used to say,
Dear god I will pray.
Will i live or will i die?
In which i do not want to apply.
I do not believe of any of this.
Go away! Go away! I say to you darkness!
- Title: The Darkness
- Artist: Lilyola1
- Description: I don't think it's very good because it's my first poem. I still like it though. Hope i checked everything. Hope u like it!
- Date: 04/15/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Kagome Takeda - 04/21/2009
- Very nice. How you can tell a good peom and a poor one is its ablity to paint a picture. Yours does just that. Great job! I'll add you to my fav. keep up the good work!
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