I WANT TOO

• Artist: UC Poika
• Description: On basic desire to belong.
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: want belonging

I WANT TOO
by UC Poika

I want to find the dragon’s nest
And name the pools she drinks;
I want to more than name the beast,
I want to know she thinks.

I want to find the “schizo” thing
And chain her down with links,
And toss her in the fishes’ tank,
And laugh as down she sinks.

I want to be as one of you,
I want to find my share,
I want to be--just anything,
I want too! Is that fair?

Comments

[FuriazFTW]

Dragons and schizos and FISH! biggrin
Is there any better combination?
On a serious note, I really like this concept. This is one of the few instances where I don't really have an idea as to the meaning behind the words, but it flows well and the last line clearly states your point.

5/5. Very astute!

[Casca 7]

It's descent. Definitely a place to start from and it flows well.

[Nyxs_Ace]

hmmm... interesting... i like how you seperated the stanzas so well. 5/5