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Oceans flow like hearts of pain
Saturated skies,tears or rain
Flames of stars whos lights' in vein
Body & earth so hard to explain
Hearts in mind, driven insane
Passions of love, deny to refrain
Feelings of hurt, minds refrain
Trying to accept this heart of pain
Denying regrets, reasons insane
The purest of sky, the oceans still rain
Why do they rain? Too hard to explain
Why people cry not always in vein
My passion, my blood runs not in vein
Emotions seem strong desist to refrain
Denial is ugly no one can explain
Oblivous cries. My heart's in pain
Filtered sky, clouds; filled with rain
Can't take it no more, I'm going insane
This silence is crazy I'm going insane
These fellings, these words are not always in vein
No rainbows, no clouds the oceans still rain
True feelings revealed, heartbreak refrain
Crying rivers sob, filled with pain
Emotions' a high, no need to explain
Why rivers run, they cry? can't explain
why? when? where? Questions. I'm going insane
My heart- aching, my soul filled with pain
Reasons for seasons, love never in vein
Reasons for reasons, love denying refrain
The oceans cry, filtered the air with rain
The rivers are dry, sunshines, no more rain
Oceans laughter fills the air, how to explain
Regrets are endless but cease to refrain
The seasons have reasons for going insane
The earth is now silent; her love was in vein
No more reasons to deny, no hearts of pain
Oceans flow like hearts of pain The purest of sky, the oceans still rain My passion, my blood runs not only in vein. No need to explain why I'm going insane. No reasons to cry, deny to refrain.
- by JackRabbit247 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/20/2009 |
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- Title: Body & Earth
- Artist: JackRabbit247
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Description:
The style is called sestina
Now those of you who know what a sestina is also know that they don't rhyme. they have a particle set you have to follow. There are 6 stanzas and then an envoi.
Mine on the other hand is a rhyming sestina, and it took quiet sometime to complete...
So ENJOY!!!!! - Date: 04/20/2009
- Tags: body earth pain vein refrain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- JackRabbit247 - 04/22/2009
- That's the point of a Sestina.. the last words are always the same.. did u not read the description
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- UC Poika - 04/22/2009
- couldn't get passed all the rhyming being the same
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- JackRabbit247 - 04/21/2009
- Thank you kagome
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- Kagome Takeda - 04/21/2009
- Wonderful! Truely it is an amazing poem, and unlike so many on here, I can tell you put alot of thought in it! Great job! 5/5!!!
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