Losing You

• Artist: ashkyns
• Description: This poem is about dating and losing my best friend
  
  
• Date: 05/04/2009
• Tags: losing

My heart, ripped from my chest
Of all my friends, you were the best
You left me cold and full of hate
I was in an awful state
I couldn't move and couldn't breathe
my tears wold fall my soul would bleed
But now I've found a better way
and you can't hurt me with what you say
I still miss you and always will
but the hole you left, it will be filled

Comments

[pink phosphorus]

i can respect this because of what you went through ....but it has all been said before.....many times

[forever_her_guardianangel]

great work i really like it i can almost feel it and thats what poetry is all about making them feel you

[Curly whirly]

oooh, Nice! ^^