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blankly staring at nothing
but in you head your still shaking
the blood that goes through your veins kept on running
and the tears from your eyes keep on running
the pain in your head never stopped dying
you hear your heart beating
you can hear the night calling
your confused with what your doing
you don't know what your finding
is it the life that you once knew
or is it the person that was you
- by priseszita |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/19/2009 |
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- Title: Memories
- Artist: priseszita
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Description:
its mixed with confusion frustration and memories...
please right what you think about it. I just write whatever pops in my head. - Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: memories
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Alibis of the Heart - 12/12/2009
- I like it, but I think you could expand on this thought.
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- RinkashiKikari - 05/25/2009
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Hey, thnx for yur comment,
yurs is pwetty guud tuu,
though i wud like it if it wuz just a lil bit longer, but yu have a whole different way of writing,
Nice.! ^.^ - Report As Spam
- iwillbeatharvestmoon64 - 05/23/2009
- this is just what i feel 5/5
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- priseszita - 05/22/2009
- haha thanks for the comment! smile what do you think?
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- dragongirl209 - 05/20/2009
- Oh yeah! I'm confused half the time cuz I have the worst memory in da world and holy crap I can't even remember what else I was going to say.....hm....
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