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You say "I love you" like its a good thing.
Then When you make him mad he hits you.
You apologize but he still goes at it.
I've warned you time after time.
I told you to tell, to break it off.
You didnt listen.
He screams at you, hits you punches you, kicks you.
But you still say you love him.
You cried for him.
You let him touch you even if you didnt like it.
He violated you.
But you still say you love him.
He hit you and even made you bleed.
You never yelled at him either.
Then that one horrid day....
As i stand infront of you, crying.
I think wow yeah that was totally TRUE love.
I told you to stop.
I was there and it didnt stop.
As i see them lower your body.
I look into the dark damb,hole they call a grave.
After a few months,
i cant sleep, eat, or think.
All i see is you.
I see your lifeless dead body.
It's my faul, i could have told some one, but i didnt.
I stand in my bathroom everytime i see your face, and hear your voice,
As i take the knife to my wrist and watch it bleed.
no one knows what i do, or how i feel.
So now im standing in your room, the place they found your lifeless dead body.
i take out the gun, and see your face, hear your voice,
"Stop don't be stupid, dont do this to yourself because of me."
I scream and say, "I COULD HAVE STOPED HIM! I COULD HAVE MADE SURE YOU DIDNT DIE, ITS MY FAULT!!!!" I think for a minute,
then put the gun to my head.....
BANG!!!! im now dead.....
THE END!
- Title: Is it really love?
- Artist: Dano51094
- Description: is about a guy who abuses a girl. and having to deal with the pain
- Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: really love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Dano51094 - 05/27/2009
- thanks for the comment...ill fix it!!!!
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- SilverWillow-Magick-Wolf - 05/27/2009
- I loved it though I think the ending didn't go well with it. 4/5
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