~+Break Down+~

• Artist: NeneIsThatGirl
• Description: Well, i wrote this while i was depressed, and one of my friends said it was really good...so i thought i'd give you ppl a little sample.
• Date: 05/31/2009
• Tags: break down

Tears they fall and I don’t know why
These moods I’m in just make me cry
The anger, rage, just all comes out
For no other reason I just scream and shout

Fine one minute, the next I’m breaking
I’m tired of putting on these smiles I’m faking
Doesn’t anyone see the pain that I’m in
Why can’t someone save me from within

My world is crumbling, fallen at my feet
While I struggle to keep from accepting defeat
I bottle it up just to appear strong
While deep inside I’ve been weak all along

I can’t keep holding on for a hope of tomorrow
When it just keeps bringing my heart more sorrow
So I sit here crying, pathetic, and a mess
Afraid of showing others the emotions I suppress

Afraid they will judge me, belittle what I feel
So I spend my nights alone, trying to deal
I don’t know who I am anymore, thoughts run deep
My bottled emotions form in nightmares as I try to sleep

I wish I could tell someone and bare what I feel
Who’d still be there to accept me and all I’d reveal
So on my own I handle these things
Negative comments pull at my strings

Raw nerves and open cuts
The smallest remark can drive me nuts
In this nightmare I often drown
Every time I have a breakdown

Comments

[fuglyfluke]

your friend is right, it is good ^_^v

[UWillKnowMeAsThatGuy]

...wow. I dnt want u to feel like that anymore. I hope you'll write some..happier stuff, lol. Hope I'm making u happy. Although, it was still written very well, lol. ^^ I loves ya.......nice f'n poem beeyotch! ^^ Haha!