Poem of Change

• Artist: Lilgemcy
• Description: I slowly came up with this poem back when I felt I had nothing to live for. It is about three years old and it's a poem about my Juvenile years. Since I turn eighteen in October of next year I would actually be happy that I finished it. Tell me what you think.
  
• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: poem change

Life is never perfect
That's all I need to say

Our lives are darkened whirl pools
blinding our distant minds

I feel the rain
The fire too
Burning
Boiling
Searing my insides through

Bloody Passion
Passionate Blood

The eyes go heavy
The mind goes blank
There's light again
But then it fades

How
Why
I constantly ask myself

Then he comes to my side
and lays whereth I

His eyes
His Beautiful eyes
So hypnotically serene
I can get lost in them forever

He tells me he loves me
Is it true of true
Strange to believe it
What am I to do

A feeling bursts through me
Not pain or fear
But Bliss and Weightlesness

Falling
Falling
Caressing
Falling again

Flying
Gliding

Singing
Never Hiding

Dancing

Loving. . . .
Loving?

That's right
Loving
Loving him more

I want to reach out
To touch
To feel

His lips against mine
Is this really real ?

A dream is a dream
whether I like it or not

I open my eyes
So
Turns out that it's not

Happy
Joyous

Finally whole

My dearest
My life
My World
My Soul

Comments

[XxBrokenAngel22xX]

I liked it, it really was a "poem of change". i like how you switched from one subject to the other. it was interesting smile

[Lilgemcy]

Thanks. ^_^

[find x]

i don't understand how i saw your poem.

totally random but made perfect sense.

your gifted. i'll give you that much.

that was amazing.