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A broken heart
A broken past
No future left
No dreams to cast
The immense pain
Behind her eyes
You'll only see
When she cries
Without a hope
That she'll find the one
The one she adores
The one she loves
With that she walks
The lonely street
Hoping her heart
Will cease to beat
- by sweetgirl101209 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 2pound - 05/31/2012
- stanza 1: throw away; stanza 2: throw away; stanza 3: throw away; stanza 4: salvage and work on it. your flow there is worth something and needs to be worked on. we need more imagery metaphor assonance and skilled writing. 2/10
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- Penelope Difference - 06/10/2009
- Very nice and flowy! biggrin
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