Tears of Flames

• Artist: Naiya Shikaku
• Description: A poem I wrote when a person at my school died. She was'nt particuarly my friend but it was still sad. This is my very first poem.
• Date: 06/09/2009
• Tags: tears flames

I cry these hot tears,
they feel like they're on fire.
I cry these tears when I meet with my fears,
they burn my face.

I cry when people die,
gone forever.
Even more when I'm choked by a lie.
Now my face is in flames.

I can't take it anymore,
I'm going to brake into ashes.
Why do I get this curse, what for?
Burned up in the flames of my tears.

It's time for me to face my fears.
It's time to stop these lies.
The burning must stop,
before someone, or me, dies.

Comments

[vv7722]

That's so sad. I love it. 4/5

[anaki_kakashi]

wow someone at ur school died? That sucks. I've had that happen at my school too. its always sad. awsome poem though.

[Samantha Shikaku]

is this about patrishia??? its a really good poem though. 5/5