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you drag me down
and say not to make a sound.
you give me a frown
thats impossible to turn around.
you tell me its time to die
all you ever said was a lie
you tell me im not worth the try
all you do is make me cry
you tell me to quit
to give up the bit
you tell me im under fit
you say you're better
you even wrote me a hateful letter
why do u hate me?
what did i do?
do i really deserve all this crap from you?!
- by cherry_cola_4ever |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/09/2009 |
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- Title: Drag me down
- Artist: cherry_cola_4ever
- Description: A short poem that i came up with in about five min. Its not the best but i tried. Tis poem is from personal experiences and im sure some can relate to, if you've had relationships like mine. please rate and comment. i would like to know your opinions because this is my first time submiting something in the arenas. thank u
- Date: 06/09/2009
- Tags: drag down
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Comments (5 Comments)
- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 06/17/2009
- Love it! i can so relate to this...girl you have some talent!
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- hikaru takaya - 06/15/2009
- i'm pretty sure many people experienced something like this. luckily i haven't... yet. this is a great poem because it seems to be speaking from the heart. you have talent!
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- Problum - 06/14/2009
- i like it,it explains what alot of ppl do to me :/ haha,anyway 5/5 -^^-
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- Touketsu-x-Tsuki - 06/11/2009
- Nice! Good Job!
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- Konig der Toten - 06/09/2009
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veary creative i have had an expierince like ur poem so its realy good
ps plz be ma friend - Report As Spam
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