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hate me
is that all you can do
take me down with you
make me a lesser value
well you say
you love me
everything is fine
those are just the words
of a liar
you can
rip my heart out
take it away
i never needed it
and neither did you
i gave you my heart
and you tore it to shreds
made the shreds as small as you could
and now you take that knife right there
sitting on the counter
i watch the time go by
and you slowly bring the knife closer
right at my heart
the knife is stabbed
right in the center
falling with the rest
to the floor
and down even more
until i reach hell
so my soul
may burn for you
- by Xxhells bloodxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/12/2009 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sk8terpunk718 - 07/10/2009
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wow! it's like an emo song called stabby rip stab stab! haha lolz!
o yeah and i ment 7 5 7 in my haiku. so yeah - Report As Spam
- hiddlestoned - 07/04/2009
- Pretty good, I think that maybe if you weren't so raw in the way you express the pain in it, it might make people think about it, and therefore like it more. Suggestion, of course. Read mine? smile
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- Tomas Youngblood - 06/13/2009
- i feel the pain......5/5(please read mine)
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- DeathLies - 06/13/2009
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Interesting style.
Seems a bit raw,
practice makes perfect none the less. - Report As Spam
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