Free

• Artist: i_heart_haters23
• Description: Many people dream of being free of worries some day.....this poem describes what it really means to be free.......one girl's dream
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: free dream

What does it mean to be free?
Letting go of many things
For all eternity

It's been my dream to be free
Free of nagging parents
Free of teasing and peer pressure
Free of work and school.....

I still don't know what it's like to be free
Can someone help me
I wish to let go and be free
Of everything bothering me

Younger siblings
Nasty food
Cruel government
Death
Racism
Mixed emotions

I want to be free of these things in the world
But I am only one girl......

Comments

[Glympse of Fate]

You have a good concept, but can you SHOW me these things? Can you show/describe why you want to be free of work and school? What is the nasty food like? How is the government cruel?

I hope this helps. Good luck! =)