Poor Disposable Pawn

• Artist: WorIds
• Description: no desription.
• Date: 06/15/2009
• Tags: poor disposable pawn

This little pawn,she sits alone.
Forgotten,worthless,disposable one.
She's attacked again and again,
'till taken off the board.
Dropped in the black box of nothing.
Gone.Dead.Worthless.Disposed of.
Misused.
Abused.
Dead.
There's nothing that she could have said.
The moment that every pawn will one day dread.
Poor lost and forgotten little pawn.
Not even noticed but by a select few
and that included you.
You.
She's dead,
did you notice?
She's dead,
did you care?
Would you still care
if she was still there
for you to cause so much despair?
She's leaving,
she your last words to her.
Fading away,so sad because she never got to say
to anyone who actually cared
Goodbye.


~Aimee 3/14/09~

Comments

[Taste of a Raindrop]

Again, this is sad. Sad poems seem to be your forte. That, or there is sadness in your heart. I believe it's both. I do understand where you're coming from though, and I love the imagery. For this, I give you four stars. Work on the structures of your poetry. Once you fix them up, their structures, compounded with your fabulous imagery, will lead to amazing poetry.