I Aint Completely Over You

• Artist: Teeks_O
• Description: It's always hard getting over someone; here's what I wrote about my experience(s). Oh and love sucks! :p
• Date: 06/25/2009
• Tags: love crush poem

I aint completely over you of course
I might act like it, but it's obvious it's false
You run through my mind all day like Usain Bolt
I'm the Earth and you're my sun, and you don't even know

You're always warming me up when I'm feeling kind of cold
When the chilll of the world comes and wants to take its toll
Oh, if only you knew how much I cared
I may not be in love with you, but I'll be there

Don't be scared...I got your back always
And if you turn your back on me, eventually I'll be okay
...But every new day, I keep my mouth shut
I wanna let you know but I can't, it's too much

Never done anything like this before, but I wanna
And it kills me inside that you are thinking of another
Oh well, I guess I gotta move on
It just sucks 'cause I really thought you might've been "The One"

- Teeks_O

Comments

[Teeks_O]

Wow, I'm just "wow-ed" at the moment :p Thanks insert_name_here_3 and Ivana_Shania for your feedbacks, I appreciate it smile

[Atheshya]

Yay for slanted rhymes (words with shared sounds that don't quite rhyme)! The line "You run through my mind all day like Usain Bolt" was funny. This poem isn't just yet another rhyming love poem.

[insert_name_here_3]

wow diffently has feeling now meaning to me really but you certainly put a lot into it 4/5 and people will eat you up over your garmmer and spelling (but I misspell a lot too so...)