Self-Destruction

• Artist: Tatsu-Chi
• Description: i originally posted this in my journal a few years back but i thought id
  re-post it here for a little more feedback (hopefully)
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: selfdestruction pain loss loneliness desperation

Self-Destruction


Verse 1
I take my faithful knife
Draw it swift across my veins
Strip away my skin right to the bone
Cut away the pain ive never shown


Chorus
See the blood flow (from wounds that will never heal)
how could you know (what i feel and why i do)
Now ive got to go
((this blade cant get any deeper))


Verse 2
Drops falling from my finger tips
Taste so sweet upon my lips
So much darkness in my life
Surely these scars cant be the light

Chorus

Bridge
On the path to Redemption
My mind a useless function
My life has reached its final junction
Is this my time My Self-Destruction


Verse 3
Now i was torn apart that day
When you said with him you felt that way
Sent me in to a spin out of control
How could you just stand and watch me fall

Chorus x2
Bridge

End
Will It Ever End
Won't You Just Let Me Die
Free Wheeling
Down Down Down
I'm Gone In A Blaze Without The Glory


Notes

() = Second Singer/Backing Vocals
(()) = Both Singing

Comments

[XxmyrandaxX]

it is AMAZING!!!! i cant wait till i hear it radomly on the radio!!!! 5/5

[Silencematters]

its very good wonderfuly writn u got talent

[bindyblueeyes]

oh yeah im gonna give it a 4/5 for the reasons mentioned below

can you read and rate my work as well?

[bindyblueeyes]

its okay but i don't like the ending of the chorus i just don't like "Now ive got to go
((this blade cant get any deeper))" the idea of those words is good but i don't think you expressed them well enough jsut use different words

[draca9saphgrl]

i wnat a copy of that when it becomes a hit