You've left me Anxious

• Artist: Eye-sketch
• Description: It's really something un-edited that I made up on the spot, but I had to do it!! I don't think this even counts as poetry....but it makes for cool mental imagery in my head.
  
• Date: 07/06/2009
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There are bullet holes in my ceiling
From the times biggrin I get bored at night

The neighbors complained
But they don't live here any more.

There are burn marks on my hardwood floor
From the time you came over

I wish you would again
But you're not on this Earth anymore

You took a piece of me when you left
leaving me restless. Leaving me restless.

Unhinged and out of it
There are pills in my cambinet

You should hear them, the whole town's talking.

Comments

[Eye-sketch]

Whooot!! Someone commented!! And LIKED it!!! That's way more than I expected. smile

[Nakara-chan]

I like it. I'm pretty sure if they don't rythme its called a free verse, i think
anyway, it's good
5/5