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"I looked at you and smiled the other day
I thought you'd see me, but you didn't
I said I loved you and waited for what you'd say
I thought you'd hear me, but you didn't
I asked you to come outside and play ball with me
I thought you'd follow me, but you didn't
I drew a picture just for you to see
I thought you'd save it forever, but you didn't
I made a fort for you back in the woods
I thought you'd camp out with me, but you didn't
I found some worms and stuff for fishing
I thought you'd want to go with me, but you didn't
I needed you just to talk to, to share my thoughts with
I thought you'd want to, but you didn't
I told you about this game, hoping you'd show up to play
I thought you'd surely come, but you didn't
I asked you to share my youth with me
I thought you'd want to, but you couldn't
My country called me off to war
You asked me to come home safely, but I didn't."
- by kitten harrin |
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- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: Violent J's Poem
- Artist: kitten harrin
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Description:
ceep the ones you love close to you and make shure they know you love them all the time cuz anything can happin at any time
make shure who ever you love knows that you love them because this world can be a prity shocking place somtimes - Date: 07/08/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Necroionutwiz - 07/13/2009
- wath poetry beautiful 5 stars ^_^
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- scitama - 07/11/2009
- Oh God..that was terribly depressing, but very good. Made my emotions water!
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- MCRkrazy1000 - 07/10/2009
- *sniff* *sniff* that is a good poem!
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- BreezerLee - 07/08/2009
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This is a VERY good poem.
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