Why Didn't You Ever Say It?

• Artist: xXCraziiRockerXx
• Description: It was a question that popped into my head when my friend called me a few weeks after we broke up. Wich is today. xD
  Anyway, I would love constructive criticisum. {D: I don't know how to spell that}
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: didnt ever

Why didn't you ever say it?
I never said it because once I did,
my heart turns to paper,
eaiser to rip.

Why didn't you ever say it?
I never said it because you would know how I would feel
each and every time I'm with you.

Why didn't you ever say it?
Because I was afraid of the truth.

If I ever did tell you...
I would've grown wings.
I would've flew when you came to my mind,
and I would've fallen a million feet when those wings
were pulled from my heart.

Comments

[Meepa_chan_is_a_MW]

and i dont mean at the end of the sentances i meant the middle sorry i didnt explain well enough sorry

[Meepa_chan_is_a_MW]

very good poem, i could give you my oponion though, you could us a break between sentances with a comma or a semi colon to add more like a dioluage to it. just my oponnion but really good! 5/5 biggrin