when you are sad

• Artist: dark-heart47
• Description: about someone who is lost and sad and is depressed
• Date: 07/13/2009
• Tags: whenyouaresad

when you are sad you think the world is ending
pain drifting through your mind
the depressed feeling
your eyes filling with tears
thinking you wont get through
like a thousand needles stabbing you in the heart
the sun gos drown and starts to rain
thinking u will never smile again
holding on just one hope
thinking no one knows how you feel
thinking of all what happened
trying to get the feeling out
when it cant
this only happens
when your sad

Comments

[xkarasu_donox]

fairly generic :
Did you put YOURE feelings into this?
How did you feel when you wrote this?
Poetry needs to be written with all the feeling in your sould, or it's just empty words.